P5

Evaluation of feedback 1

I have looked at my script and agree that there are some unnecessary commas that are not needed and I will take them out. However, I don't think I need to write my script about an alien invasion or set in space to make it a Sci-Fi script. It is Sci-Fi, because the main focal point of the script is a futuristic robot.

Evaluation of feedback 2

I agree with the feedback. I should definitely include more physical description of the characters and make the leader more strict.